Johnny M.
Phone: 087 456 7890
Email: partyboy88@hotmail.com
Location: Ireland
Photo: 📸 [Photo of Johnny at a festival holding a pint, wearing sunglasses]
Personal Statement
Hi, my name is Johnny. I’ve worked in hotels and restaurants and am good with people. I like working in busy places and want a new job now.
Skills
- Dealing with people
- Working under pressure
- Talking to customers
- Doing events
Work Experience
Events Manager – Grand Hotel
- Did events.
- Looked after guests.
- Booked rooms.
Hotel Job
- Worked in bar and restaurant.
- Did cash.
Education
Went to school and college.
Other Stuff
- Single
- Likes football
- 27 years old
- Can drive
Issues with this CV
- Unprofessional photo: Including a casual image at a festival is inappropriate for job applications.
- Informal tone: Phrases like “Hi, my name is Johnny” are too casual for a professional CV.
- Vague job descriptions: Duties like “Did events” and “Did cash” are unclear and unhelpful.
- Unprofessional email address: An address like partyboy88@hotmail.com does not give a good impression.
- Irrelevant personal info: Marital status, hobbies, and age should be left off unless directly relevant.
- No achievements listed: There are no measurable successes or specific examples to demonstrate skills or impact.
- Poor structure: The CV lacks defined sections and formatting, making it hard to scan or read.